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Array ( [sid] => 11782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => You [time] => 2003-02-01 22:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You said you’d always be there
you shouldn’t have lied it wasn’t fair
what you tried to make me see
was that you really loved me
but it wasn’t true
and now I’m sorry that I ever loved you
I found your letters
one had said you could love me better
that's not true
he would never do the things you do
you said you didn’t want to get involved
or put pressure on me
but still you enticed me , and got me where you wanted me to be
I should of known
that you’d make me love you and leave me all alone
I thought we’d be perfect for each other
but after waiting and struggling for so long
I couldn’t have been more wrong
you think I would have seen through you
but I couldn’t ,or I wouldn’t
I was too infatuated with you
and if you came back into my life
I ‘d fall right back in love with you

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Carmen [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You

Contributed by Carmen on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You said you’d always be there
you shouldn’t have lied it wasn’t fair
what you tried to make me see
was that you really loved me
but it wasn’t true
and now I’m sorry that I ever loved you
I found your letters
one had said you could love me better
that's not true
he would never do the things you do
you said you didn’t want to get involved
or put pressure on me
but still you enticed me , and got me where you wanted me to be
I should of known
that you’d make me love you and leave me all alone
I thought we’d be perfect for each other
but after waiting and struggling for so long
I couldn’t have been more wrong
you think I would have seen through you
but I couldn’t ,or I wouldn’t
I was too infatuated with you
and if you came back into my life
I ‘d fall right back in love with you

Copyright Â© Carmen ... [ 2003-02-01 22:00:00]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by gunner2 on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:21:02 AM AEST
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take care if this is true

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Carmen on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 03:21:15 PM AEST
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This poem is 4 years old and it used to be very true, But I saw this person recently at first I was caught off gaurd, but Iwas able to walk away feeling okay with it

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