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Held together
Puppeteer
Making dance

Fools thought
Was real
Though
Not a chance

Puppet
Breaks
Spell
Ends

Strings cut
Torment
Over
Magic died today
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Magic Died

Contributed by NoSaint on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 06:30:01 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Silver treads
Held together
Puppeteer
Making dance

Fools thought
Was real
Though
Not a chance

Puppet
Breaks
Spell
Ends

Strings cut
Torment
Over
Magic died today

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2006-04-05 18:30:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 07:00:31 PM AEST
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You know, I like your style. I have never read someone's poetry that was written that way, its unique. I like it.

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:11:20 PM AEST
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Short with tons of meaning. I liked how you presented it here. Great write. Peace, Laura

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:03:21 PM AEST
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Something very new from you, and I like it much. Everytime I go away when I come back you have amazing poetic works waiting that I have not read, and they seem to be something of genius. Well done as always my friend.

Bravo!

SCM

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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yes Shari this fits entire situation to a tee and I understand it perfectly. The magic has died and its sad. We learned a lesson along the way with this though didnt we? This is wonderful and I love the abstract within it.
huge hugs
Michelle

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by EmptyGirl on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 03:04:41 AM AEST
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A very unique poem. I find the more I read it, the more I like it, and I liked it very much to begin with. :) I am constantly amazed at the talent of the poets on this site, yourself included. Thanks for the poem :)

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:45:03 PM AEST
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Unique. I like the way you write.

Re: Magic Died (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST
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i liked it even though it wasn't my cup of tea i still liked it

Tiff

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