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Array ( [sid] => 117759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my life in general [time] => 2006-04-05 11:39:25 [hometext] => fake emo i wrote this about tripping over a stair who knew [bodytext] =>
My life is a cycle of heartbreak and disappointment

Whenever it becomes to joyful I know I have an appointment with pain

It pulls me into the drain
that tears my soul apart like a tub of water
being pulled by the gravity of my obsession
caused by my old friend depression

I wish I could break the cycle I’m stuck in
it’s the rut that I live in
I wish I could just give in
I want to live in another place
But that opportunity was not given

I feel as if I’m stuck in a pile of muck
Like an old shoe I have been cast aside into a puddle
I am ignored by the cars that go by
I sit on the side of the road all alone
I wish I could find a place in witch I feel at home

When will this pain end?
The period of healing has just begun
My skin is still raw from the chafing wind off cold voices
A sound is not heard from me
Thoughts scream from inside me
Then every things stops only echoes

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 48 [informant] => randumbchit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
my life in general

Contributed by randumbchit on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:39:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




My life is a cycle of heartbreak and disappointment

Whenever it becomes to joyful I know I have an appointment with pain

It pulls me into the drain
that tears my soul apart like a tub of water
being pulled by the gravity of my obsession
caused by my old friend depression

I wish I could break the cycle I’m stuck in
it’s the rut that I live in
I wish I could just give in
I want to live in another place
But that opportunity was not given

I feel as if I’m stuck in a pile of muck
Like an old shoe I have been cast aside into a puddle
I am ignored by the cars that go by
I sit on the side of the road all alone
I wish I could find a place in witch I feel at home

When will this pain end?
The period of healing has just begun
My skin is still raw from the chafing wind off cold voices
A sound is not heard from me
Thoughts scream from inside me
Then every things stops only echoes





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Re: my life in general (User Rating: 1 )
by onceandagain on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:58:05 AM AEST
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You said that this was written from a trip over a stair, but to me, it sounds as if you have had a period of depression of your own. A good write, I could see myself in parts of it.


Re: my life in general (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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Get in touch with your heart, where life can reside... waste not the time, or time will waste you.. be well..




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