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[aid] => mick
[title] => Whoever Said These Were The Best Years....Lied
[time] => 2006-04-04 23:26:18
[hometext] => this hopeful heart divided between black and red...please comment...i need feedback a.s.a.p. please
[bodytext] => With hopeful hearts Divided between red and black We are the linked parts Of this war machine you can't put back We are the outlined faces In the moshpit of the world We are not wanting to be replaced Hardly help how our destinies are unfurled We arent the only ones Wanting to be heard More try every day Striken with powerful words We know we are worth it Thought you condemn us to think not What with all the commercials and magazines We've made it this far: give us a shot? Though every story is different Most have common ground We are aware these are the worst years When you life can depend on a pound To be so critical is to be a teen To spend hours at a gym or in front of a mirror Just to be worthy to be seen Now there's the affect of those magazines... So your sick of our whining? Well, I'm sick of most people I know Do you hear me complaining? Do something about it; have something to show With hopeful hearts Divided between black and red We're the ones who can only hope You hear all the words we said [comments] => 1 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 75 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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