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I Give and U TAKE

Contributed by Carmen on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



To be with me I give you every hope
And when it’s not of convenience for you it’s hard for me to cope
You call me up
And wanna go out
But only when your girl your without
You say you miss our quality time
But your heart won’t be and was never mine
You say you think of me with vast regard
If that’s the case
Why’s this so hard
I give you friendship with a plan
To do for you anything I can
You’ve changed alot lately
It worries me greatly
I used to believe every word you said
Now I struggle to figure what’s going on in your head
You say one thing and do another
But I don’t trip
I give you space so that you don’t smother
I want to be close to you
Even though I know I’m not supposed to
I don’t know what to think of how I feel
Sometimes I wonder am I for real
I give you so much and you don’t respond
But then you make it sound like we’ve got some kind of bond
I give and you take
And every single time I feel the ground shake




Copyright © Carmen ... [ 2003-02-01 22:00:00]
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Re: I Give and U TAKE (User Rating: 1 )
by xFalling_of_Starsx on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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this describes. exactly what i am going through. i know so completely. and i just hope your is going better then mine




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