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Array ( [sid] => 117711 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Border of Dreams [time] => 2006-04-04 17:55:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is a lake that exists at the border of dreams,
Containing the most beautiful water that gleams
With the glory of battles won over love,
And one lost sun, wandering above.
The glorious stillness, it hides its deceit,
For the lake that exists mourns its defeat
Over eons, eras, paladins and kings;
The wind dives down, and stirring, it sings
About a wonderful story of a magnificent cove,
That hid from it all, in a bountiful grove.
Being sheltered, it missed nothing at all,
For now that it shows nothing to appall.
And gusts blowing from the chilly dawn
Reach back and tickle an abandoned swan.
Painted white, the color of pale winter moons,
The swan shudders with the wind-blown tunes.
And swaying to life, it takes it all in:
This brilliant sanctum hiding within. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kidnic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Border of Dreams

Contributed by kidnic on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is a lake that exists at the border of dreams,
Containing the most beautiful water that gleams
With the glory of battles won over love,
And one lost sun, wandering above.
The glorious stillness, it hides its deceit,
For the lake that exists mourns its defeat
Over eons, eras, paladins and kings;
The wind dives down, and stirring, it sings
About a wonderful story of a magnificent cove,
That hid from it all, in a bountiful grove.
Being sheltered, it missed nothing at all,
For now that it shows nothing to appall.
And gusts blowing from the chilly dawn
Reach back and tickle an abandoned swan.
Painted white, the color of pale winter moons,
The swan shudders with the wind-blown tunes.
And swaying to life, it takes it all in:
This brilliant sanctum hiding within.

Copyright © kidnic ... [ 2006-04-04 17:55:16]
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Re: The Border of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ThePhoenix on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 06:55:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery.

Re: The Border of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilly-Quill on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:37:47 PM AEST
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What magic of wonderment, what depth of the whole, in scenic amazement of the past "long ago..."

Stunningly enthralling, and brilliantly masterful, this oceanic muse~!
~*Lilly-Quill

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