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Array ( [sid] => 117704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WHATS THE REASON [time] => 2006-04-04 16:31:47 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS AFTER MY MOM STATRED ACTING LIKE A DOUCHE BAG [bodytext] => All i wanna do now is die
you had to call and mess with me

everytime i hear your voice
i wanna cut deeper and deeper

till the blood has no end
covering my clothes like a shield

the cuts on my body seem to go on for ever
if it wasn't for you it would have never happened

its easy for you to point the finger
but when my life is in the balance whats my trigger

you blame me for whats not right
(line edited out) and gave me life

so why now am i holding the knife
i cut and cut and bleed and bleed

till my life comes to an end
and my heart can't breath

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => Line edited out due to unsuitable content. Please remember that this is a family site and that some of your poems content is not suitable for children to read. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

WHATS THE REASON

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 04:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

All i wanna do now is die
you had to call and mess with me

everytime i hear your voice
i wanna cut deeper and deeper

till the blood has no end
covering my clothes like a shield

the cuts on my body seem to go on for ever
if it wasn't for you it would have never happened

its easy for you to point the finger
but when my life is in the balance whats my trigger

you blame me for whats not right
(line edited out) and gave me life

so why now am i holding the knife
i cut and cut and bleed and bleed

till my life comes to an end
and my heart can't breath

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-04-04 16:31:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WHATS THE REASON (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 04:52:41 PM AEST
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Yeah she's a *** But you have other poeple that love you like family so don't give up show her that you live in spite of her (Comment edited due to bad language. Please do not swear in comments. - Moderator_16)

Re: WHATS THE REASON (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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i can really relate...i have tons of problems with my parents. i would say something encouraging but i dont know...just hold on & life will go on

Re: WHATS THE REASON (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 09:48:28 PM AEST
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i can really relate...i have tons of problems with my parents. i would say something encouraging but i dont know...just hold on & life will go on

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