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Array ( [sid] => 117703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Empty [time] => 2006-04-04 15:35:23 [hometext] => just another one of my poems feel free to comment. [bodytext] => I saw this woman named abby and she was achy inside.
I then left and walked down the alley and saw a guy named andy and he looked angry.
I wanted to know if there was any one who felt so empty.

I saw the army truck and the army men were carrying a baby.
I felt so bad for the army men and that baby.
Of course I always feel bad about myself.

The bailey truck was carry some beanie babies I collect those.
I love to look at the world and all its beauty.
I went to see a woman named betty and she was with her b/f billy.
While I was talking to betty these people shot us a birdie.

I took a blister from my shoes and my toe looked all bloody.
I feel so bloomy and I am all the time busy.
I love to eat candy and I would love to be carefree.
When I feel gloomy I listen to my cd and it makes me cheery .
I am no classy woman and I feel so cranky and crazy.
I have been told I was crazy.

I love to eat something crunchy but I feel so deadly.
I walked to the deli and I was so drowsy and felt like a dummy.

I went ahead and met dusty and he was doing his duties.
I saw dusty on duty so early in the morning.
Alot of people tell me to take it easy and I try to look fancy.
I am not happy and I love the holy ghost.

I love my mommy and I don't like mondays.
I wished I had alot of money so I wouldn't feel so moody.
I saw this woman named molly when I went to the deli to buy some food.
Alot of things are nasty and I watched the nightly news.
I dont like nosy people and I love to drink pepsi.

I wished I could feel perky and I sure don't live piggy.

All I am saying is life is so empty and I feel like a zombie.
I like wednesdays because it's almost the end of the week.

I worry all the time about everything.
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Empty

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 03:35:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I saw this woman named abby and she was achy inside.
I then left and walked down the alley and saw a guy named andy and he looked angry.
I wanted to know if there was any one who felt so empty.

I saw the army truck and the army men were carrying a baby.
I felt so bad for the army men and that baby.
Of course I always feel bad about myself.

The bailey truck was carry some beanie babies I collect those.
I love to look at the world and all its beauty.
I went to see a woman named betty and she was with her b/f billy.
While I was talking to betty these people shot us a birdie.

I took a blister from my shoes and my toe looked all bloody.
I feel so bloomy and I am all the time busy.
I love to eat candy and I would love to be carefree.
When I feel gloomy I listen to my cd and it makes me cheery .
I am no classy woman and I feel so cranky and crazy.
I have been told I was crazy.

I love to eat something crunchy but I feel so deadly.
I walked to the deli and I was so drowsy and felt like a dummy.

I went ahead and met dusty and he was doing his duties.
I saw dusty on duty so early in the morning.
Alot of people tell me to take it easy and I try to look fancy.
I am not happy and I love the holy ghost.

I love my mommy and I don't like mondays.
I wished I had alot of money so I wouldn't feel so moody.
I saw this woman named molly when I went to the deli to buy some food.
Alot of things are nasty and I watched the nightly news.
I dont like nosy people and I love to drink pepsi.

I wished I could feel perky and I sure don't live piggy.

All I am saying is life is so empty and I feel like a zombie.
I like wednesdays because it's almost the end of the week.

I worry all the time about everything.




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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:28:05 AM AEST
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My dear butterflygirl, you shared with us a moving world and its pains and joys.. Your heart is so good, and Jesus loves you, and so do I.. I hope you feel better.. do not worry my friend, God is watching out for you..

Huggies,

Your friend,

RaquelLeah


Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:07:33 AM AEST
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I totally feel you on this write, You have such a great style , I love this > dont get discouraged and god bless you


HUgs

LG


Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 04:24:10 AM AEST
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You know, Autumn, we'd be lost without you. This is a somewhat sad poem but you put a clever wit to it. Never stop, okay?

Take care

*huge hug*

Tim
:-)




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