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Array ( [sid] => 117642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Innocent man [time] => 2006-04-03 17:32:43 [hometext] => What was this one? Dunno, just wrote it down. Too much drama TV, that's my probelm. (Ad libber) [bodytext] => Breathe it in and hold that breath
It's your last as an innocent man
Ignore your heart that races
And run

Into the building and take
Take what you want
What you need
Whatever, it's not an issue

In your bag so noone sees
And make your escape
With sweets and chocolates
To shut them up

Your only 10 and
Your a criminal
Well I'm telling
On you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 71 [informant] => Somnium [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Innocent man

Contributed by Somnium on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Breathe it in and hold that breath
It's your last as an innocent man
Ignore your heart that races
And run

Into the building and take
Take what you want
What you need
Whatever, it's not an issue

In your bag so noone sees
And make your escape
With sweets and chocolates
To shut them up

Your only 10 and
Your a criminal
Well I'm telling
On you

Copyright © Somnium ... [ 2006-04-03 17:32:43]
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Re: Innocent man (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:39:58 PM AEST
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heh... this was cute
The ending made me laugh.
real good picture. being about childhood or not, i enjoyed it.
Keep posting you have a knack for it.
-trini

Re: Innocent man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 04:30:31 AM AEST
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I thought this was a serious one about a bank robber or summat!

Till I read the last 4 lines lol!

This has gotta be worth 5 stars.

J

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