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Array ( [sid] => 117639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drunken tears on the eyes of this child [time] => 2006-04-03 17:27:13 [hometext] => Spookily random at 10 o clock at night after a glass of wine. Oh well-ad lib again (sorry). Doesnt mean anything in particular so don't read too much into it [bodytext] => Ah so subtley you take
it from my grasp

Ah so sweetly you tell
theres nothing wrong

Ah so darkly my
suspiscions cloud my thoughts

And how easily your
flattery flows

through you tainted vortex
that you call a mouth

Circular soundwaves
mean nothing to me
only to your twisted mind

Empty your threats
that still make me weap
Solemn your words that
Tell me to jump
Secret the lies
that I could not hear

Behind her back and
behind her's too
You pathetic little children
Your twice my age and I have
to console you
Well, boo hoo and deal with it

Well in to the oven
with your mockery
Ill feed it to you
along with the blood
that you tore from them
using the knife that you
gave me to
do your works

Seldom this truth will
return to you
now I've locked you in
fallen and weak
unclean fool
these words hurt me no more

Stay there a while, like
a child on the stair
And think about it
a lifetime or two. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Somnium [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Drunken tears on the eyes of this child

Contributed by Somnium on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Ah so subtley you take
it from my grasp

Ah so sweetly you tell
theres nothing wrong

Ah so darkly my
suspiscions cloud my thoughts

And how easily your
flattery flows

through you tainted vortex
that you call a mouth

Circular soundwaves
mean nothing to me
only to your twisted mind

Empty your threats
that still make me weap
Solemn your words that
Tell me to jump
Secret the lies
that I could not hear

Behind her back and
behind her's too
You pathetic little children
Your twice my age and I have
to console you
Well, boo hoo and deal with it

Well in to the oven
with your mockery
Ill feed it to you
along with the blood
that you tore from them
using the knife that you
gave me to
do your works

Seldom this truth will
return to you
now I've locked you in
fallen and weak
unclean fool
these words hurt me no more

Stay there a while, like
a child on the stair
And think about it
a lifetime or two.




Copyright © Somnium ... [ 2006-04-03 17:27:13]
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Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:34:25 PM AEST
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WOW.
very powerful i really really liked this write. fresh and devinely dark
keep up the great work
-trini


Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST
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i agree with trini very powerful and moving. I love the emotion and the style. Refreshing great job!


Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:08:32 AM AEST
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You write well after a glass of wine...

Don't wanna encourage you but i'm better after a bottle or two!

Loved the title as well very inventive.

J.




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