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Array ( [sid] => 117629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JSA Rant #1 [time] => 2006-04-03 15:30:08 [hometext] => A Very Confused Young Man Wrote This [bodytext] => I fell in love with a girl
not much i can do about it
i know she doesnt love
me half as much as i do
i really do wish i could
stop thinking about her

Jesus Jess i love you so
much i keep thinking about
the weeks that i wont have you
i nearly cry when i think of you
moving away from me

God what will i do when im
forced to live without you
your so beautiful

i love it when you look at
my soul with you eyes
looking so true ive always
found you trustworthy
how can i be so lucky

ive started to cry because
i started to think about how
evil i am im such a Jerk
all the time i dont know how
youve put up with me for
all this time

I wish we could stay
together but i know it
wont happen not ever

I wish you could love
me like i love you
but that you love me
at all i know is true

it makes me so happy
when we dance together
you are so pretty and
will be forever

i know that you love me
and it makes me so happy
its amazing how blessed
i am to be able to be with you

i guess unhappiness makes
me realize this i guess that
i cant be all happy and smiles
without a couple bad days to even it out

some stuff that had happened
to somone i cared for just had to
come back to me

my poor uncle Bruno ill
miss him so much not
seeing him smile as
i wont ride my bike by
nearly as much

its amazing how much
lighter my heart feels
without the weight it
has felt since the day of
his death.

aww well life goes on
i shallsay with a smile
and i shall face my death
when i finish the mile

What i rhyming scheme ive got huh?
Told you it was a rant [comments] => 0 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 24 [informant] => jsajacobanderson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
JSA Rant #1

Contributed by jsajacobanderson on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 03:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I fell in love with a girl
not much i can do about it
i know she doesnt love
me half as much as i do
i really do wish i could
stop thinking about her

Jesus Jess i love you so
much i keep thinking about
the weeks that i wont have you
i nearly cry when i think of you
moving away from me

God what will i do when im
forced to live without you
your so beautiful

i love it when you look at
my soul with you eyes
looking so true ive always
found you trustworthy
how can i be so lucky

ive started to cry because
i started to think about how
evil i am im such a Jerk
all the time i dont know how
youve put up with me for
all this time

I wish we could stay
together but i know it
wont happen not ever

I wish you could love
me like i love you
but that you love me
at all i know is true

it makes me so happy
when we dance together
you are so pretty and
will be forever

i know that you love me
and it makes me so happy
its amazing how blessed
i am to be able to be with you

i guess unhappiness makes
me realize this i guess that
i cant be all happy and smiles
without a couple bad days to even it out

some stuff that had happened
to somone i cared for just had to
come back to me

my poor uncle Bruno ill
miss him so much not
seeing him smile as
i wont ride my bike by
nearly as much

its amazing how much
lighter my heart feels
without the weight it
has felt since the day of
his death.

aww well life goes on
i shallsay with a smile
and i shall face my death
when i finish the mile

What i rhyming scheme ive got huh?
Told you it was a rant




Copyright © jsajacobanderson ... [ 2006-04-03 15:30:08]
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