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Array ( [sid] => 117628 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling With No Hand To Grab [time] => 2006-04-03 14:40:59 [hometext] => Another poem wrote when I was high...emotions just come out then I guess..it's another one about Chris....theres a little catch in it, see if you can find it..please tell me what you think... [bodytext] => Destroy me.
Hate me.
Beat me.
Rape me.
That's all I hear when I'm with you, can't you see the things you do?
You tear me down, make me nothing.
I know you smile, as you wilt me with your cloudly sky.
Do you not see the way you make me cry?
So I cross my heart and hope to die, take your needle and stab it deeper into my eye.
Because you never loved me, you never really did.
What do you know about love your just a kid.
Maybe when your older you'll see what you did.
I hope when you see my tombstone you see this...
Christ can't save me now, I'm to gone to save.
How did you do this? Why did you take me so far away?
Raise your hand if your happy to see your work.
I see your hand...it's the clearest of all.
So tell me this are you happy that you watched me fall...? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => addicted2selfharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Falling With No Hand To Grab

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 02:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Destroy me.
Hate me.
Beat me.
Rape me.
That's all I hear when I'm with you, can't you see the things you do?
You tear me down, make me nothing.
I know you smile, as you wilt me with your cloudly sky.
Do you not see the way you make me cry?
So I cross my heart and hope to die, take your needle and stab it deeper into my eye.
Because you never loved me, you never really did.
What do you know about love your just a kid.
Maybe when your older you'll see what you did.
I hope when you see my tombstone you see this...
Christ can't save me now, I'm to gone to save.
How did you do this? Why did you take me so far away?
Raise your hand if your happy to see your work.
I see your hand...it's the clearest of all.
So tell me this are you happy that you watched me fall...?

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2006-04-03 14:40:59]
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Re: Falling With No Hand To Grab (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:26:22 PM AEST
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WOW... Your in a place, where you don't need to be. Stone.. you need to come back to reality. This chris really hurt you. need to stay away from him. And it is never ever to late to come to Jesus except when you take your last breath then it will be to late. so find him now while you still can... love ya.

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