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Array ( [sid] => 117623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => UNCERTAINTY [time] => 2006-04-03 13:04:12 [hometext] => This is one I wrote years ago, maybe in 2000 or 2001 under my maiden name. [bodytext] => To tell you how I feel just seems so cruel,
So I look into your eyes not knowing what to do.
You are a shoulder to lean on
A knight without his armor.
You ride to my rescue and pull me in your arms.
Holding me so close, your touch is so tender,
But with all the time gone by my heart will still not render.
I know how you feel and I don't know what to say.
God knows I want to love you but my heart gets in the way.

If I keep on waiting your feelings will grow stronger.
Will I feel any different if I wait any longer?
That is the question and the answer eludes.
Knowing my past, "No", I conclude.
But, not knowing the future there is no way to tell
If the love deep inside me will spring up from the well
Where all these years it's waited for you to come along
To shower it with patience and help heal what is wrong.
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UNCERTAINTY

Contributed by jgb on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

To tell you how I feel just seems so cruel,
So I look into your eyes not knowing what to do.
You are a shoulder to lean on
A knight without his armor.
You ride to my rescue and pull me in your arms.
Holding me so close, your touch is so tender,
But with all the time gone by my heart will still not render.
I know how you feel and I don't know what to say.
God knows I want to love you but my heart gets in the way.

If I keep on waiting your feelings will grow stronger.
Will I feel any different if I wait any longer?
That is the question and the answer eludes.
Knowing my past, "No", I conclude.
But, not knowing the future there is no way to tell
If the love deep inside me will spring up from the well
Where all these years it's waited for you to come along
To shower it with patience and help heal what is wrong.

Copyright © jgb ... [ 2006-04-03 13:04:12]
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Re: UNCERTAINTY (User Rating: 1 )
by Leslie on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:41:06 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading your poems and feel you are a very strong writer who writes with resolute and heartfelt emotion.

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