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a symphony of feelings
Contributed by
roisin
on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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february 1st, 2003
a new moon
imbolc
a magical,mesmerizing, shimmering evening of great promises in store
a gift from the angels for us?
tis planned the evening of our handfasting
our commitment for a year and a day
for all of time and still more to come
a life-time partnership
tis not a guarantee, mind you
of life-long harmony and happiness,
but for now an knowledgment of this magical joyfulness that is felt
our hopes of personal growth and freedom for each other
and this
a wonderful celebration of our caring, our love
so the dance begins in earnest now
as we have both agreed that
our journey together will now continue
the wheel that seemed to have no beginning , nor ending
begins to turn again
for us
oh brighid, daughter of dagda, patroness of poetic inspiration,prophecy, and healing
with your white wand
your fire burns bright today
you mark the coming of spring, a new beginning for all...
look to us fondly
am thinking of this evening
tis a gypsy-like love spell he's cast on me
him with his dancing eyes,his gorgeous smile,his beautiful words, the caring and laughter...he is lovely!!!!
a gentle giant with the sexy voice
i can picture us standing there with continual soft snowflakes of glittering stars gently falling
delicate mists of promises softly spoken
the eloquence of other unspoken messages in our eyes
i picture it so perfect and romantic
so full of promise
but...but...what seems to be the matter?
as woman i have the last word....
FLY AWAY, FLY AWAY
on my iridescent butterfly wings
when the urgings come i will fly
i know i will
and i dread the breaking of his heart
Copyright ©
roisin
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2003-02-01 18:40:00]
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by Dani on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 09:22:12 AM AEST
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ooo... very nice write!
"FLY AWAY, FLY AWAY
on my iridescent butterfly wings
when the urgings come i will fly
i know i will
and i dread the breaking of his heart "
Love those lines.... :)
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by karoody on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:59:36 AM AEST
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i like this one too, rosie
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 01:00:06 AM AEST
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hey, Rosie this was very different although very good and beautiful written. I enjoyed this stirred up some interesting imagery in my head.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:37:05 AM AEST
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| A beautiful day described. Hope it was a nice day. Likked this. |
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 04:36:54 PM AEST
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| a true symphony of feelings!!! |
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Re: a symphony of feelings
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 10:13:26 AM AEST
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all i can say is bravo ...standing ovation
loved it
oh by the way did i tell you
your poem was awesome |
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