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Array ( [sid] => 117591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title [time] => 2006-04-03 01:04:52 [hometext] => need a title,please comment [bodytext] => Can't you see all the feeling you bring
or did I bury them that deep because
I didn't want no one to see what was
in me now you forgotten me and know
I feel I can't show my face I'm such a
disgrace in a world I have grown to
hate in place I want forget all over a
love I've can't forget why did it have to
leave I can feel something breathing
on my neck it won't let me go it's has
gain control or this hurt soul I can feel
it in my head he's talking in my ear
telling me "you should no longer care
give in to your nightmare it not like they
care about you or else they would knew
how much you been though so let the
blood flow down let collect on the ground
let that blade do it's thing let it take you
out this place that you hate for I have a
spot that burning for you" GET OUT MY
HEAD what did I do it can't end like this
I wasn't done yet I'm not ready to leave
for I still care about them I still care about
her you can't have my soul I'm not letting
go I looking for more beyond this world of
mortal sin so I can't let the devil win. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => chaos78 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
no title

Contributed by chaos78 on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:04:52 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Can't you see all the feeling you bring
or did I bury them that deep because
I didn't want no one to see what was
in me now you forgotten me and know
I feel I can't show my face I'm such a
disgrace in a world I have grown to
hate in place I want forget all over a
love I've can't forget why did it have to
leave I can feel something breathing
on my neck it won't let me go it's has
gain control or this hurt soul I can feel
it in my head he's talking in my ear
telling me "you should no longer care
give in to your nightmare it not like they
care about you or else they would knew
how much you been though so let the
blood flow down let collect on the ground
let that blade do it's thing let it take you
out this place that you hate for I have a
spot that burning for you" GET OUT MY
HEAD what did I do it can't end like this
I wasn't done yet I'm not ready to leave
for I still care about them I still care about
her you can't have my soul I'm not letting
go I looking for more beyond this world of
mortal sin so I can't let the devil win.




Copyright © chaos78 ... [ 2006-04-03 01:04:52]
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Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:28:57 PM AEST
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Maybe a better format would be nice
But otherwise
good write?
Thats what everyone says




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