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Array ( [sid] => 117559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ALL OR NOTHING [time] => 2006-04-02 14:57:12 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS BECAUSE MY LIFE HAS CHANGED [bodytext] => Lost in the clouds of pillowy darkness
i see the stars shoot across the moon lit sky

the heat in the air makes me feel like crying
my heart on fire makes me just wanna die

in my sleep last night i dreamed of you
i wish i was your true love and didn't have to chose

my heart pains for your love and attention
but you don't want me

why did you lie about your feelings all the time
where you playing me or just ruinning lines

killing me slowly with your smiles and laughter
never saying never even when its not the right time

my life is in your hands and don't let it go
hold on tight and let your heart lead the way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

ALL OR NOTHING

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Lost in the clouds of pillowy darkness
i see the stars shoot across the moon lit sky

the heat in the air makes me feel like crying
my heart on fire makes me just wanna die

in my sleep last night i dreamed of you
i wish i was your true love and didn't have to chose

my heart pains for your love and attention
but you don't want me

why did you lie about your feelings all the time
where you playing me or just ruinning lines

killing me slowly with your smiles and laughter
never saying never even when its not the right time

my life is in your hands and don't let it go
hold on tight and let your heart lead the way

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-04-02 14:57:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ALL OR NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by chanceof_promise on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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i like

Re: ALL OR NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenXbyManyX on Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:37:00 PM AEST
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this hit me hard.
I'm going thru the same thing.
Lies really hurt when you believe what someone you like is sayin.
Sometimes I feel like i just shouldn't have bothered in a relationship.
But, nice, I liked it a lot.
Well done.

Lauren

Re: ALL OR NOTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by rapnificent on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:17:24 PM AEST
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truely descriptive.
Enjoyed it.

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