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ALL OR NOTHING
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Lost in the clouds of pillowy darkness
i see the stars shoot across the moon lit sky
the heat in the air makes me feel like crying
my heart on fire makes me just wanna die
in my sleep last night i dreamed of you
i wish i was your true love and didn't have to chose
my heart pains for your love and attention
but you don't want me
why did you lie about your feelings all the time
where you playing me or just ruinning lines
killing me slowly with your smiles and laughter
never saying never even when its not the right time
my life is in your hands and don't let it go
hold on tight and let your heart lead the way
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-04-02 14:57:12]
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Re: ALL OR NOTHING
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by chanceof_promise on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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Re: ALL OR NOTHING
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by BrokenXbyManyX on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:37:00 PM AEST
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this hit me hard.
I'm going thru the same thing.
Lies really hurt when you believe what someone you like is sayin.
Sometimes I feel like i just shouldn't have bothered in a relationship.
But, nice, I liked it a lot.
Well done.
Lauren |
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Re: ALL OR NOTHING
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by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:17:24 PM AEST
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truely descriptive.
Enjoyed it. |
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