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Array ( [sid] => 117534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No point (wishing for a fairytale) [time] => 2006-04-02 00:31:02 [hometext] => this started of as just a fun poem but then i decided i wanted it to be a little more then just that [bodytext] => Do you believe in fairytales,
Lives so perfect to the smallest details,
Glass slippers and dresses of the finest silk,
Houses made entiry of candy and chocolate milk,

Would you like to not grow up, just like peter pan,
And be a hero evermore in never neverland,
Or escape the perils of your step family,
Marry a prince and live forever happily,

Could you ever kiss a toad,
Slimy and green as his croaks echoed,
You never know he could turn to a prince,
Isnt that what you want, your chance at pure bliss,

But I dont think stuff like that happens anymore,
Our lives are so scheduled it becomes more of a chore,
Lunch at twelve, Pilates at two,
Oh my gosh theres so much to do,

Sometimes I wish I could live like a queen,
Or never grow up remain just a teen,
But life goes on, through the ups and downs,
Theres no point wishing for that non-existent crown. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 14 [informant] => -why_not_let_me_live- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

No point (wishing for a fairytale)

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:31:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Do you believe in fairytales,
Lives so perfect to the smallest details,
Glass slippers and dresses of the finest silk,
Houses made entiry of candy and chocolate milk,

Would you like to not grow up, just like peter pan,
And be a hero evermore in never neverland,
Or escape the perils of your step family,
Marry a prince and live forever happily,

Could you ever kiss a toad,
Slimy and green as his croaks echoed,
You never know he could turn to a prince,
Isnt that what you want, your chance at pure bliss,

But I dont think stuff like that happens anymore,
Our lives are so scheduled it becomes more of a chore,
Lunch at twelve, Pilates at two,
Oh my gosh theres so much to do,

Sometimes I wish I could live like a queen,
Or never grow up remain just a teen,
But life goes on, through the ups and downs,
Theres no point wishing for that non-existent crown.

Copyright © -why_not_let_me_live- ... [ 2006-04-02 00:31:02]
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Re: No point (wishing for a fairytale) (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:31:47 AM AEST
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i love the flow of this and love the last stanza its like all fairy tale like and reality hits you in the face.. great job in expressing that.. thanks for sharing

JENNI

Re: No point (wishing for a fairytale) (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:48:55 PM AEST
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toad licking..same thing; getting euphoric about nothing that will come true.

Re: No point (wishing for a fairytale) (User Rating: 1 )
by -why_not_let_me_live- on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:36:14 AM AEST
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thanx for the comments :) i like that bout the poem to jenni hope to see you wroting again soon

whynotletmelive xoxox

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