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Array ( [sid] => 117518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY PEACE: WHEN [time] => 2006-04-01 15:51:27 [hometext] => I wrote it so comment if you want [bodytext] => It chokes me
Pulls me down
Makes me long for a cold dark box

My blood I now wish to chill
My soul to kill

This world around me

My mind it destroys
An anger from within it employs

What's deep within it brings to the top
My hart this rage almost stops

Now there is no where left to run
So I ask myself
Where will I find my salvation
Down the barel of a gun?

When will it come that safe haven
To wich I can run
Where my life will simply cease

WHEN WILL I FIND MY PEACE [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 32 [informant] => no_1nos_me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

MY PEACE: WHEN

Contributed by no_1nos_me on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 03:51:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It chokes me
Pulls me down
Makes me long for a cold dark box

My blood I now wish to chill
My soul to kill

This world around me

My mind it destroys
An anger from within it employs

What's deep within it brings to the top
My hart this rage almost stops

Now there is no where left to run
So I ask myself
Where will I find my salvation
Down the barel of a gun?

When will it come that safe haven
To wich I can run
Where my life will simply cease

WHEN WILL I FIND MY PEACE

Copyright © no_1nos_me ... [ 2006-04-01 15:51:27]
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Re: MY PEACE: WHEN (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 03:55:36 PM AEST
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Nice write-thank you for sharing- Peace and Light

Re: MY PEACE: WHEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 04:02:39 PM AEST
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very nicely written

Tiff

Re: MY PEACE: WHEN (User Rating: 1 )
by snowflake on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:14:49 PM AEST
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Great Write i often wonder when will i find peace also Nice write

*~SnoWflAkE~*

Re: MY PEACE: WHEN (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 8th October 2007 @ 12:44:21 PM AEST
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SO there is peace, or saddness?
I feel theres the worse
Dont give in to stupid comments, or re-marks
Your someone
And someone who has alot
So look and see
Its there

brew~

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