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[aid] => mick
[title] => Are you still there
[time] => 2006-03-31 16:31:56
[hometext] => This just came to me one day so I wrote it down, it's probably terrible but there you go.
[bodytext] => I lie back hard, cold bed beneath me The ceiling fan stares back at me, he can't look Are You still there? I feel You Your heart in time with mine. I'll try to find a way to say goodbye A thousand thoughts at a thousand miles an hour, I could still stop this, I could still still scream until they let us go. But I don't, I can't, can't move, can't think, can't breathe anymore. I don't think I want to. Cold latex fingers grip my sides. I stretch my neck to see my knees either side. A blue cloth is all my modesty. You're still there we haven't yet let go. And I could still say no, say stop, say goodbye and walk away. But no. I can feel their sharp intruments in me, My fear numbs the pain, but not the pain in my head as it reels a million choices I could take. Is this the one? Your beat's still there, so faint, so frail. Soon, I know, to stop. You're still mine though, You still belong to me. I cradle you now though I never can. It's all hapening now and I know it's too late, to scream, to cry 'till they let go and let us be one. I asked for this, I wanted this, did I? Descisions aren't so simple anymore. Are you still there? i can't feel your beat, only mine. i listen, i listen so hard. one where Two should be. They're speaking again but i can't listen, i don't even try. They lift me up and i dress, i cover up my body. A little water to wash me of this deed. Are you still there? Are you? i feel where you should be but it's empty and i'm alone. Left to hear only one beat beat beat beat i know it'll never forgive beat beat beat... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Somnium [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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