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Array ( [sid] => 117441 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2006-03-31 09:45:55 [hometext] => a lil long but i hope that dosnt put any of you off reading it all comments are welcome [bodytext] => Sitting on the corner, the worlds passed me by,
But I guess it dosnt matter one day I will die,
Sooner or later I dont care when,
Trapped in this world, of unforgivable sin,

If you know the meaning of life will you please tell me,
All this silence I can hear is becoming overwhelming,
Hey you over there, will you be my friend,
I am so lonely will you love me, hold me till my end,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if i dont want to stay,
In the distance I hear a faint cry, Its my mother.....
Goodbye, Goodbye

What happens to us after this life,
Is it worth waiting for, is it worth this strife,
Some say our souls return to our true home,
But what if you dont have one, do you remain alone,

Destend to be this way for all eternity,
Was I made to be alone is this my destiny,
Why is the only question, I can bring myself to ask,
Why is the concept of being alone, so hard for me to grasp,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if I dont want to stay,
In the distance i hear a faint cry, Its my father.....
Goodbye, Goodbye

When I was younger, I remember being happy,
My parents would cuddle me I remember then they loved me,
How could my life have changed so much, in such a short time,
The voices in my head say the blame is all mine,

But now Im alone, Ive had some time to think,
What was it that pushed my family to the brink,
Was it my insecurities, or maybe it was theres,
Watever it was, I dont think any of them really cares,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if I dont want to stay,
In the distance I hear a faint cry, Its my mother,
My father,
My brother,
Goodbye, Goodbye,




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Goodbye

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 09:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Sitting on the corner, the worlds passed me by,
But I guess it dosnt matter one day I will die,
Sooner or later I dont care when,
Trapped in this world, of unforgivable sin,

If you know the meaning of life will you please tell me,
All this silence I can hear is becoming overwhelming,
Hey you over there, will you be my friend,
I am so lonely will you love me, hold me till my end,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if i dont want to stay,
In the distance I hear a faint cry, Its my mother.....
Goodbye, Goodbye

What happens to us after this life,
Is it worth waiting for, is it worth this strife,
Some say our souls return to our true home,
But what if you dont have one, do you remain alone,

Destend to be this way for all eternity,
Was I made to be alone is this my destiny,
Why is the only question, I can bring myself to ask,
Why is the concept of being alone, so hard for me to grasp,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if I dont want to stay,
In the distance i hear a faint cry, Its my father.....
Goodbye, Goodbye

When I was younger, I remember being happy,
My parents would cuddle me I remember then they loved me,
How could my life have changed so much, in such a short time,
The voices in my head say the blame is all mine,

But now Im alone, Ive had some time to think,
What was it that pushed my family to the brink,
Was it my insecurities, or maybe it was theres,
Watever it was, I dont think any of them really cares,

I know that Im always wishing my world away,
But whats the point of being here if I dont want to stay,
In the distance I hear a faint cry, Its my mother,
My father,
My brother,
Goodbye, Goodbye,








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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:59:12 AM AEST
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Good poem I get your message as to what
you trying to say however life is what we make it nobody can make you happy you have
look in side your self love your self say I am a good person and I love me and so does God it will all fall into place some day
hugs freespirt


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:06:46 PM AEST
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i agree one hundred precent with freespirit here...life is what you make it...the choices you make effect everything and anything...it's all about you now..not the rest of the world..not your mother, your father, or your brother...there comes a time in our lives when we must learn to take controle and see what molding your own fate is all about...i think you have reached that point...good luck and godspeed...stay true to yourself through it all and you'll end up where you belong in the end.




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