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I've decided I'm going to take these pills today.

I'm sorry. I know that you won't understand,
but I really did look for that helping hand.

It always seemed as if no one was there,
and no one ever really seemed to care.

Always was told there's nothing more we can do.
You're just a lost cause is what I'm telling you.

I never wanted to hurt you or make you cry,
but it's so overwhelming how much I want to die.

So, when your at the funeral seated at the pew,
sitting in the chapel where we were going to say I do.

Remember I loved you and it wasn't your fault,
but living my life is like a daily assault. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ravendominique [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Sorry Dear

Contributed by ravendominique on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 08:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'm sorry Dear, but I won't make it to our wedding day.
I've decided I'm going to take these pills today.

I'm sorry. I know that you won't understand,
but I really did look for that helping hand.

It always seemed as if no one was there,
and no one ever really seemed to care.

Always was told there's nothing more we can do.
You're just a lost cause is what I'm telling you.

I never wanted to hurt you or make you cry,
but it's so overwhelming how much I want to die.

So, when your at the funeral seated at the pew,
sitting in the chapel where we were going to say I do.

Remember I loved you and it wasn't your fault,
but living my life is like a daily assault.

Copyright © ravendominique ... [ 2006-03-30 20:46:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sorry Dear (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:28:38 PM AEST
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aww..you will make it. hang in there. a history teacher who lost her husband said one day that she thinks he just finaly gave up....and then she said that some now believe that once you've reached the end like that..that point where we actually will kill ourselves...that that is the point where we have actually begun the healing process and what is sad is thats when we get the guts to do or die..and so many give up and kill themselves when all they really had to do was make it over that last hump and everything would of been ok......

Re: Sorry Dear (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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hang in there, this is a very powerfull poem, made me cry. you dont know how lucky you are to have someone who loves you. tell them how you feel. let them help.

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