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Array ( [sid] => 117356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Angel [time] => 2006-03-30 04:52:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Giver of souls
Taker of hate
come back to me
and give me mine back
I gave myself to the wrong person
and now suffer the pain
I have nothing left to look forward to
nothing left to gain...
But yet thru all the pain
and sorrow, she walked in
saw the true self hidden deep
buried under souls taken away
and I'm so glad she came
she helped take away my pain
I gave her the chance
to see the real me
and to look towards the feelings
held deep inside
I care for her more than I could ever put into words
I can't stop thinking of her
and the things that we are to do
She's with me in my dreams
and beside me each day
thru the hearache and pain
to guide me along the way
She's the embodiment of the truth and life
from the One above
the hope and dreams
that I share with my love
Is she perfect in her ways?
well, no, but she doesn't have to be
that the point that's makes her special to me
Her eyes shine like bright gems
her soul lights up the skies of night
it makes her glow with pure brightness
and makes her feel like the light
She's perfect in my eye,
but she doesn't see that part
I'd hate to see her cry
I just wanna give her my heart
to show her how I truly feel deep down
to keep that smile on her face
and turn that other around
I think of her as an angel sent from Him
to come down upon me
and keep me from the Grimm
Thank you, sweet one
thank you for your time
and I hope just one day
you could maybe just be mine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 2 [informant] => whiteleo1984 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Angel

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:52:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Giver of souls
Taker of hate
come back to me
and give me mine back
I gave myself to the wrong person
and now suffer the pain
I have nothing left to look forward to
nothing left to gain...
But yet thru all the pain
and sorrow, she walked in
saw the true self hidden deep
buried under souls taken away
and I'm so glad she came
she helped take away my pain
I gave her the chance
to see the real me
and to look towards the feelings
held deep inside
I care for her more than I could ever put into words
I can't stop thinking of her
and the things that we are to do
She's with me in my dreams
and beside me each day
thru the hearache and pain
to guide me along the way
She's the embodiment of the truth and life
from the One above
the hope and dreams
that I share with my love
Is she perfect in her ways?
well, no, but she doesn't have to be
that the point that's makes her special to me
Her eyes shine like bright gems
her soul lights up the skies of night
it makes her glow with pure brightness
and makes her feel like the light
She's perfect in my eye,
but she doesn't see that part
I'd hate to see her cry
I just wanna give her my heart
to show her how I truly feel deep down
to keep that smile on her face
and turn that other around
I think of her as an angel sent from Him
to come down upon me
and keep me from the Grimm
Thank you, sweet one
thank you for your time
and I hope just one day
you could maybe just be mine




Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-03-30 04:52:23]
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Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 03:04:06 PM AEST
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sweet and touching, great write.


Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 09:51:41 PM AEST
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I think this is sweet and heartfelt, I really enjoyed reading this and I wish you the best with your dream and love

LG




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