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But better late than never, i guess.
I have learned a lot
But never the less
I have learned how to love.
It all seems so surreal now
Whenever I look back
Look back at how distructive I was
Before I meet you.
You have been a savior to me
Allowing me to see life clearly
Allowing me to god.
So now I love because I am
Because I am closer to whole than ever before
Peiced together by patience and courage
I love because I am closer to whole than ever before. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Genevieve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Closer to whole

Contributed by Genevieve on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:42:27 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I learned a little late
But better late than never, i guess.
I have learned a lot
But never the less
I have learned how to love.
It all seems so surreal now
Whenever I look back
Look back at how distructive I was
Before I meet you.
You have been a savior to me
Allowing me to see life clearly
Allowing me to god.
So now I love because I am
Because I am closer to whole than ever before
Peiced together by patience and courage
I love because I am closer to whole than ever before.

Copyright © Genevieve ... [ 2006-03-29 19:42:27]
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Re: Closer to whole (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:06:12 PM AEST
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this was really sweet. i normally don't like this kind of poetry but this just said something to me.

Re: Closer to whole (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:47:51 PM AEST
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very good piece of writing... heartfelt and reflective.
i like it a lot. i hope to read more sometime

keep it up!

Re: Closer to whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:57:38 PM AEST
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Yes, each day we learn just a little more, our life is lessons learned. Better late than never is a positive approach to knowing you have and will for the rest of your life. Teach others what you learned, most beautiful lessons, lessons that will increase love.

RaquelLeah

Re: Closer to whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmanuel on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:33:28 PM AEST
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I liked it, but I have a question, how do you know you "learned a little late" what if you learned when you were meant to?

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