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Array ( [sid] => 117261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Does she know what she wants? [time] => 2006-03-28 22:30:21 [hometext] => Abstract poetry regarding a woman. I don't like it too much. Lets see what you think. [bodytext] => I'm trying to hold on.
But i'm losing my grip.
Waitin for the moment
Biting my lower lip

Patience is just a plug
To get us to wait
I may miss the moment
All this may be negated

I've been sedated
By words played like a game
You said you're not ready
Those words always the same

Throw the dice and gamble
Make a move, take a chance
Stop with answers routine
Stop denying romance

Weigh the risk, survey the reward
I don't have to buy the pitch
Surprise her, make her eyes yours
Make two lives begin to stitch [comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tecnorobo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Does she know what she wants?

Contributed by tecnorobo on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 10:30:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'm trying to hold on.
But i'm losing my grip.
Waitin for the moment
Biting my lower lip

Patience is just a plug
To get us to wait
I may miss the moment
All this may be negated

I've been sedated
By words played like a game
You said you're not ready
Those words always the same

Throw the dice and gamble
Make a move, take a chance
Stop with answers routine
Stop denying romance

Weigh the risk, survey the reward
I don't have to buy the pitch
Surprise her, make her eyes yours
Make two lives begin to stitch

Copyright © tecnorobo ... [ 2006-03-28 22:30:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Does she know what she wants? (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 12:25:38 AM AEST
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Perfectly true. Everything written in this poem is inspiring.
I liked
"Throw the dice and gamble
Make a move, take a chance
Stop with answers routine
Stop denying romance"
the best. We DO need to stop denying everything, stop becoming robots. Stop becoming slaves to higher masters.

Re: Does she know what she wants? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:14:24 AM AEST
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nicely done

Michelle

Re: Does she know what she wants? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:22:55 PM AEST
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Wow..the first verse seems to speak about me... sigh..
Excellent write...
Jenni

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