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Array ( [sid] => 117237 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Commitment [time] => 2006-03-28 17:11:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Commitment
~
If a rose stands for love
Then I present you this bouquet
To express my inner feelings
In the deepest kind of way
~
If a kiss seals the deal
Let us simply embrace
Make a commitment forever
Letting nothing go to waste
~
If a ring said you're mine
Let me place it on your finger
A promise from my heart
That I will never linger
~
If a word tells it all
Then simply say “I do”
And I stay by your side
Until the end of life is through
~
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Commitment

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Commitment
~
If a rose stands for love
Then I present you this bouquet
To express my inner feelings
In the deepest kind of way
~
If a kiss seals the deal
Let us simply embrace
Make a commitment forever
Letting nothing go to waste
~
If a ring said you're mine
Let me place it on your finger
A promise from my heart
That I will never linger
~
If a word tells it all
Then simply say “I do”
And I stay by your side
Until the end of life is through
~

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2006-03-28 17:11:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by lovebug on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:21:11 PM AEST
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THIS IS A VERY WARM AND TOUCHING POEM I HOPE THAT EVERYTHING YOU SAID IN IT HAS HAPPENED FOR YOU . GREAT WRITE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

YOUR FRIEND:
LOVEBUG

Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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Very simple but wonderful write....Mike

Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 09:22:51 PM AEST
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it was simple and sweet!
a poem that goes straight to the heart !

Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 10:01:34 PM AEST
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Wow.well presented to the undying love for thee.......Beautiful...

Brew~

Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:14:41 AM AEST
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A very beautiful poem. It's so sweet.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Commitment (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:17:42 AM AEST
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The style of this is very refreshing. The crisp words show a loyal heart to the audience and a true love to be had by one who is just.

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