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Array ( [sid] => 117100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unknown feeling [time] => 2006-03-26 15:56:58 [hometext] => to richard harding, from this day on things will change [bodytext] => Unknown feeling of what they call love
this meaningless time with you has been enough
given all of me and now I'm done
Returned the favor and given me none
I am very dumb to think these feelings I felt
Pain so hard these feelings are numb
I knew a man once I loved very dear
That when I did cry he was worth every tear
I felt so good my soul was free,
This man I loved was the one for me
Now I'm with a man that I can't look into his eyes
cause these feelings he makes me feel are full of hate and deceatful lies
left me with a scar branded in my flesh of skin
so painful it damaged my heart within
This unknown feeling I know was NOT love
Just an unknown feeling
that has had enough [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => marly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

unknown feeling

Contributed by marly on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 03:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Unknown feeling of what they call love
this meaningless time with you has been enough
given all of me and now I'm done
Returned the favor and given me none
I am very dumb to think these feelings I felt
Pain so hard these feelings are numb
I knew a man once I loved very dear
That when I did cry he was worth every tear
I felt so good my soul was free,
This man I loved was the one for me
Now I'm with a man that I can't look into his eyes
cause these feelings he makes me feel are full of hate and deceatful lies
left me with a scar branded in my flesh of skin
so painful it damaged my heart within
This unknown feeling I know was NOT love
Just an unknown feeling
that has had enough

Copyright © marly ... [ 2006-03-26 15:56:58]
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Re: unknown feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Claire890 on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:25:50 PM AEST
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great honest write! claire.

Re: unknown feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:28:48 AM AEST
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well done heartfilled write, the best are written from the heart-

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