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Array ( [sid] => 117089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Question Thee [time] => 2006-03-26 11:26:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why can't you look at me and see that
I'm not just another girl?
Why can't you talk to me beyond
A meaningless "hey"?
Why can't you hear me?
Hear into my soul and listen to my dreams.
Why can't you notice me?
I'd dye my hair green and still be invisible.
Why can't you include me?
You know what sports I play.
Why can't you ever think of me,
Just a hundredth of the time I think of you?
Why can't you give me a chance?
Everyone says we would work out.
Why can't you wonder
What's going through my mind when I look at you?
Why can't you feel my eyes
Following every move you make?
Why can't you realize
That I always happen to be around?
Why can't you tell
That you take my breath away?
Why can't you understand
That I'm in love with you? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Drapes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Question Thee

Contributed by Drapes on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 11:26:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why can't you look at me and see that
I'm not just another girl?
Why can't you talk to me beyond
A meaningless "hey"?
Why can't you hear me?
Hear into my soul and listen to my dreams.
Why can't you notice me?
I'd dye my hair green and still be invisible.
Why can't you include me?
You know what sports I play.
Why can't you ever think of me,
Just a hundredth of the time I think of you?
Why can't you give me a chance?
Everyone says we would work out.
Why can't you wonder
What's going through my mind when I look at you?
Why can't you feel my eyes
Following every move you make?
Why can't you realize
That I always happen to be around?
Why can't you tell
That you take my breath away?
Why can't you understand
That I'm in love with you?

Copyright © Drapes ... [ 2006-03-26 11:26:23]
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Re: I Question Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 12:45:51 PM AEST
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WOW!!That was great.I hope he notices you and y'all work out.

best wishes!
bridgette

Re: I Question Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 01:05:53 PM AEST
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tell him, sometimes they dont get it. this is a beautiful testiment of your heart.
Michelle

Re: I Question Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:06:09 PM AEST
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I enjoied this writing of yours and I'm sorry that you feel unoticed cuase for most my life i felt the same but take to hart that some you may not have noticed sees you the same way

Re: I Question Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 07:31:29 PM AEST
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i understand what you r talk'n bout. but if it's ment to be....it will be. and sometimes its not fair that love can only be felt by one and not the other. but just wait, you never no what tomor might bring! really good write, had strong feeling and some passion. awesome.

Re: I Question Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:09:30 AM AEST
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wow... really powerful & emotional... hope it all works out 4 u

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