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Array ( [sid] => 117079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2006-03-26 04:15:36 [hometext] => I'm still new at this, so please keep in mind that I'm pretty awful. Enjoy:) [bodytext] =>

You brush the hair from my face
And tell me that Im lovely
I close my eyes and hide my smile
And thank my God above me

Thankful for his wisdom,
Compassion, love and grace
I dont need proof that God exists
I see him in your face

Missing all my loneliness
I look inside and see
Only found perfection there
It was you and me

Wrapped up all around you
Safe against the world
How Id love to hear you whisper
Saying Im your girl

I hold your hand and beckon on
Through the deepest night
Please dont be not afraid my love
I will be your light

Finally alone now
Whats this thing called time?
Cant believe that its true
I am yours and you are mine

The yearning need of your kiss
Shook me to my core
Imagine you, here with me
I want nothing more

Needed to feel lost in you
I just had to know
But I couldnt seem to care
You were drinking of my soul

Every line I’ve written
Has been for you to see
I want nothing more my love
All you need is me

So when you lie awake at night
Nursing ancient sores
You only need to close your eyes
And know that I am yours

I sit and wait for the day
You come and say you love me
And that is why I smile and laugh
And thank my God above me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 25 [informant] => EmptyGirl [notes] => Poem edited as requested in 'Site Help'. - Moderator_16
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Thank You

Contributed by EmptyGirl on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:15:36 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems





You brush the hair from my face
And tell me that Im lovely
I close my eyes and hide my smile
And thank my God above me

Thankful for his wisdom,
Compassion, love and grace
I dont need proof that God exists
I see him in your face

Missing all my loneliness
I look inside and see
Only found perfection there
It was you and me

Wrapped up all around you
Safe against the world
How Id love to hear you whisper
Saying Im your girl

I hold your hand and beckon on
Through the deepest night
Please dont be not afraid my love
I will be your light

Finally alone now
Whats this thing called time?
Cant believe that its true
I am yours and you are mine

The yearning need of your kiss
Shook me to my core
Imagine you, here with me
I want nothing more

Needed to feel lost in you
I just had to know
But I couldnt seem to care
You were drinking of my soul

Every line I’ve written
Has been for you to see
I want nothing more my love
All you need is me

So when you lie awake at night
Nursing ancient sores
You only need to close your eyes
And know that I am yours

I sit and wait for the day
You come and say you love me
And that is why I smile and laugh
And thank my God above me




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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 10:03:58 AM AEST
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You have wonderful writes girl. I love this verse

Needed to feel lost in you
I just had to know
But I couldnt seem to care
You were drinking of my soul

Keep'm coming....Mike


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 05:11:11 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. it has a good flow to it.

"The yearning need of your kiss
Shook me to my core
Imagine you, here with me
I want nothing more"

great verse. you have a way with words. keep writing ~Apryl


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 09:42:46 AM AEST
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Nice work, nice flow .....like rainwater down a mountain stream.
The main thing is that you write for yourself and if others enjoy it to then its a bonus.
That's how I look at it.
May you write many more !!

Steve




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