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Array ( [sid] => 117052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Weaknesses [time] => 2006-03-25 19:14:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cold hearts and words to match,
Iron doors with not a latch,
Escape is pointless as is this love,
Take this pain and store it far above,

Within the skies I will hide,
Shrouded by clouds my tears have dried,
My armor is now a little bit stronger,
I can fight this life a little while longer,

The sun is now bright and shining,
But I cannot see the silver lining,
Lost in the dark, I find I am,
A scared and timid little lamb,

Beneath my eyelids horrors lie,
Bruises leak a blood red cry,
Hoping no one will notice the blow,
These are things they can never know,

My skin is not so thick anymore,
In this blackness I fall to the floor,
Alone I let myself feel free,
Free to dream of you and me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 75 [informant] => crimson_regret420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Weaknesses

Contributed by crimson_regret420 on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Cold hearts and words to match,
Iron doors with not a latch,
Escape is pointless as is this love,
Take this pain and store it far above,

Within the skies I will hide,
Shrouded by clouds my tears have dried,
My armor is now a little bit stronger,
I can fight this life a little while longer,

The sun is now bright and shining,
But I cannot see the silver lining,
Lost in the dark, I find I am,
A scared and timid little lamb,

Beneath my eyelids horrors lie,
Bruises leak a blood red cry,
Hoping no one will notice the blow,
These are things they can never know,

My skin is not so thick anymore,
In this blackness I fall to the floor,
Alone I let myself feel free,
Free to dream of you and me.

Copyright © crimson_regret420 ... [ 2006-03-25 19:14:20]
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Re: Weaknesses (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:06:18 PM AEST
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oh wow, painful write, every line seemed to have meaning behind it, great job, i loved it, and hope it all gets better.

~natalya

Re: Weaknesses (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:36:40 PM AEST
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Beneath my eyelids horrors lie,

great line, great poem.

Well written and keep it up,
-moses

Re: Weaknesses (User Rating: 1 )
by TheKid on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 08:59:05 PM AEST
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Awesome write... Really know how to express your feelings.

Re: Weaknesses (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:22:00 PM AEST
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great write...jh

Re: Weaknesses (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:30:20 PM AEST
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you have talent. that makes you better than 90 percent of this site. excellent poem and a wonderful usage of talent i must say. i loved the rhymes, the structure of this poem, and the rhythm. you have good concepts and a strong ending. a poem with a happy ending, sort of a twist i must say. especially from the previous stanza. i must remember you, for those few days i actually can stand reading poetry =]

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