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Array ( [sid] => 117036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Into pill's grave... [time] => 2006-03-25 16:09:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This page of raging history
is my list of pains and more
nothing more is every
stain that blackens door

my room is winter shaded
look back to no reflection
just a fire that's faded
drugs are no protection

yes i'm shaking leaves drop
my eyes can't focus more
shivering need i can't stop
twitching till the morn'

this deep lake is my sleep
weep deeper than the well
addiction's hill is steep
pillows of pills in hell

i'm falling into wind
the ground will swallow me
trees are evil grinned
their roots will follow me...

Into the grave...

...that drugs made.

dw [comments] => 5 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 13 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Into pill's grave...

Contributed by In_a_While on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:09:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This page of raging history
is my list of pains and more
nothing more is every
stain that blackens door

my room is winter shaded
look back to no reflection
just a fire that's faded
drugs are no protection

yes i'm shaking leaves drop
my eyes can't focus more
shivering need i can't stop
twitching till the morn'

this deep lake is my sleep
weep deeper than the well
addiction's hill is steep
pillows of pills in hell

i'm falling into wind
the ground will swallow me
trees are evil grinned
their roots will follow me...

Into the grave...

...that drugs made.

dw

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Re: Into pill's grave... (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 05:30:57 PM AEST
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wow, dark, painful, great write i loved it.

~natalya

Re: Into pill's grave... (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 06:59:07 PM AEST
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I can understand how you feel, all addicts, at least those that can realize what they are feel this way, in some form or another

ALINA

Re: Into pill's grave... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheKid on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:39:09 PM AEST
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ENJOYED this one a lot! Excellent write

Re: Into pill's grave... (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:46:53 PM AEST
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great piece of work..jh

Re: Into pill's grave... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:44:33 PM AEST
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~*Dwayne*~
The heartaches and outcome results from an addict/user. Drugs is a no go. I wished I could make all the illegal drugs just vanish. The world would be such a safer place to be in. As always you can produce a deep and thought provoking write my dear friend.

i'm falling into wind
the ground will swallow me
trees are evil grinned
their roots will follow me...

Into the grave...

...that drugs made.

Unfortunately for some. This will be their fate.
Thanks for sharing ur write with us ~*DW*~
Always a pleasure to venture forth ur pages.
*warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~

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