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Contributed by EmptyGirl on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



When the morning sun rises
Filling earth and sky with flame
I lie awake in bed and cry
Cause you dont know my name

Whenever I pass by you
Can barely catch my breath
I love the feelings that engulf me
The sweetest kind of death

Lying in your darkness
Warring love and shame
I know I cant control this
And you dont know my name

Are we friends? Are we more?
You have to tell me truly
So afraid youre gonna hurt me
Dont want you to use me

Could you be my champion?
Free me from my pain
Or would you just leave me here?
For you dont know my name

My feelings wont deny me
And I dont know what to do
A heart once cased in coldest ice
Melts away with you

Does it matter that I see you?
Or that I hate these foolish games?
Or that I need to be you?
But you dont know my name

I cant forget your memory
Or the happiness you sold me
Haunted by your kiss
When I asked you to hold me

Know youre gonna hurt me
But Ill take all the blame
After all its not your fault
That you dont know my name

I feel you disappearing
Quicksand at your feet
I wonder if you even know
You have my heart to keep

But I guess it doesnt matter
Ill leave the way I came
I could have lived inside your eyes forever
And you never knew my name





Copyright © EmptyGirl ... [ 2006-03-25 03:31:36]
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Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 03:38:36 AM AEST
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Oh Emptygirl!!!!
Brilliant!!!!
This is hard to believe, your first poem!!!
Oh you have what it takes girl!!!
More!!! MORE!!!
coni

ps who told you your poetry was terrible!??!!!


Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 06:59:00 AM AEST
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this is very good for your first poem,well done


Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:38:54 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site, this is a very well verse write and I look forward to reading more of your work....Mike


Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by Abhisek on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:50:51 AM AEST
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Good Poem I like that.


Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 01:00:14 PM AEST
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great job for a first timer...jh


Re: Name (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:46:36 PM AEST
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Deeply romantic. Flowing with passion and feeding off of brillance. Well done!

SCM




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