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Smile For Me
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 01:26:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see cloudy skies in your eyes tonight
The waters are runnin' so high
I know it seems you've got nothin' left
But, baby, you've got me
So smile, smile for me
A sunny sky will come one day
And you'll be its friend for all time
So, darlin', smile for me
You always cover your face up
Hiding your beauty far away
But I can see it shining through
Let your light shine on
And smile, smile for me
The sunny skies are comin' soon
And they'll hold you so close
So, darlin, smile for me
I know brighter days have yet to come
So please, please smile for me
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Adreana
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2002-07-11 13:26:26]
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Re: Smile For Me
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by Thumbsucker on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 04:12:39 AM AEST
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Hi Adreana,
I`m really pressed for time but I just HAD TO COMMENT on this poem. I read it a few days ago but then lost it before I could comment on it.
I for one think it`s GREAT, (for what my opinion is worth). I love the sentiments in it. I don`t care if it doesn`t rhyme. IT`S BEAUTIFUL. It`s going to get a 5 from me. Thunbsucker
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Re: Smile For Me
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by Lia on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:35:23 AM AEST
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| smiles...such a beautiful part of life. The world would be a gloomy place without them |
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Re: Smile For Me
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:26:40 PM AEST
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| amazin poem |
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