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Broken Promises
Contributed by
black_flames
on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 07:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tears I'll cry
Blood will dry
As you tear my heart
I just can't rid myself of the pain
from my shattered soul you've slain
A tear will roll
From bloodshot eyes
as this realisation
Forms your lies
Blood will congeal
From my wrist
and on my blade
how could I trust t
those promises you made?
Now I sing this mournful song
To remember
Those nights I'd cried so long
Why did you leave me?
without a clue
to show how much
I much I hate you
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black_flames
... [
2006-03-24 19:57:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken Promises
(User Rating: 1 ) by foxfire44 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 08:01:25 PM AEST (User
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good job, you can fell the pain in this poem ...very well put togather keep it up |
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