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[title] => Suffering
[time] => 2006-03-24 06:55:56
[hometext] => This is not really a poem nor will any of my submission be, this is what I feel at the moment!
[bodytext] => How can they know the pain they cause, the ripping apart of the human soul that only the unlucky must suffer. We suffer and weep while they sit in ignorance, not understanding the messages we send as we fall apart in front of the world. Those who fall are those who stand alone and are remembered in the world as those who shall never find the object of their passion. Do they even know what this object is? I know what mine is and yet it is unobtainable. Others expect you to shift your passion; this is a task impossible for those who know what true passion is. It is us who feel the sufferings of the world but is it really us who suffer?
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[informant] => Heretic
[notes] => I am sorry, but only poetry submissions are allowed on the homepage. Everything else must go within in the forums, the journals or in the story section. Please consider this from now on. Thankyou. - Moderator_16
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Suffering
Contributed by
Heretic
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Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 06:55:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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How can they know the pain they cause, the ripping apart of the human soul that only the unlucky must suffer. We suffer and weep while they sit in ignorance, not understanding the messages we send as we fall apart in front of the world. Those who fall are those who stand alone and are remembered in the world as those who shall never find the object of their passion. Do they even know what this object is? I know what mine is and yet it is unobtainable. Others expect you to shift your passion; this is a task impossible for those who know what true passion is. It is us who feel the sufferings of the world but is it really us who suffer?
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Re: Suffering
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 05:23:15 PM AEST
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nice write
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Re: Suffering
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by no_1nos_me on
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| While i know what M_16 said your writing is great keep it up |
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