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Array ( [sid] => 116924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mom and Dad in Heaven [time] => 2006-03-23 16:00:21 [hometext] => this was written when i was on the road. hope you all like i. by the way, what did you think of the Janie poems? [bodytext] => They locked you in a barn
Tied you up with yarn
I believe you could've broke free
But why didn't you
You left me
All alone with no one I knew
I was just born
As I sit here with my crew
My soul is torn
You took him away from me
The person I need
Or at least needed
Cause I don't anymore
I've learned to deal
With being alone
Ever since the day
They found his bones
In the river Republican
He was eaten by a pelican?
I hardly think so
Is that even possible?
Okay fine
You wanna know the truth?
I told him I hated him
Probably broke his heart
He came apart
Went off and was murdered
My own brother?
dur dur dur
So to answer your question
No, I didn't kill my brother
But I will kill myself
I'll be there soon
Mom and Dad in heaven [comments] => 2 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 52 [informant] => flamingblade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Mom and Dad in Heaven

Contributed by flamingblade on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



They locked you in a barn
Tied you up with yarn
I believe you could've broke free
But why didn't you
You left me
All alone with no one I knew
I was just born
As I sit here with my crew
My soul is torn
You took him away from me
The person I need
Or at least needed
Cause I don't anymore
I've learned to deal
With being alone
Ever since the day
They found his bones
In the river Republican
He was eaten by a pelican?
I hardly think so
Is that even possible?
Okay fine
You wanna know the truth?
I told him I hated him
Probably broke his heart
He came apart
Went off and was murdered
My own brother?
dur dur dur
So to answer your question
No, I didn't kill my brother
But I will kill myself
I'll be there soon
Mom and Dad in heaven




Copyright © flamingblade ... [ 2006-03-23 16:00:21]
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Re: Mom and Dad in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by jonquilcottage on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 05:54:33 PM AEST
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I hope you dont kill your self. I was wondering what prompted this poem - jenny


Re: Mom and Dad in Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by flyineagle on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 11:53:16 AM AEST
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yea this is brendan sounds ok so did your mom and dad die or do you just wish they would good poem




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