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Jealousy

Contributed by EvaLastingRose on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:09:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



As she curls up in this tiny ball,
With her arms wrapped around her knees,
She lays her head down and cringes with fear.
She lets a single tear run down her face.
Her blue side turns into a deep and dark sea green.
Wishing he wasn't there,
That he was here instead,
With her.
Alone in the dark,
As she sits here,
Trying to figure out how to deal with the news that hits her harder with each thought,
Recurring moments about each time she said "I love you",
Flash before her eyes.
She can't fix him,
Because he's not broken.
It's just the felling that she can't handle inside,
And she wishes it would just go away.
She needs a relief,
She needs some goodness to come out of this,
She needs to feel the trust that she once had.
The sleepless nights,
She tosses and turns,
They keep her up,
Forever thinking of him.
Thinking of what he's done to her,
And how much it hurts her mind.
There is a creature trying to escape,
And she tries so hard to let it free,
But it will never go away,
It lives too deep inside of her.
Go away and leave her deprived mind alone,
This over emotional girl can't handle you.
Sitting on an imaginary rain cloud,
That stays the same shade of gray,
Suffocates her,
Upside down,
Her brain is choking.
Senseless feelings driving the shock through her eyes,
Leave her,
So she can be alone once again,
Returning to the soul of the broken girl she is,
With words of her own,
Only to be heard by no one,
And shared in her prayers with God,
Her only friend.




Copyright © EvaLastingRose ... [ 2006-03-22 22:09:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:42:28 PM AEST
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Very good write. I love the first part of this all

As she curls up in this tiny ball,
With her arms wrapped around her knees,
She lays her head down and cringes with fear.
She lets a single tear run down her face............
That he was here instead,
With her.
That part stands out the most.

Again wonderfully written.




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