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Made of tears

Contributed by darkscorpio on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:49:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Our demise and fall is made of tears
Born from disillusion of the many years
We’ve spent apart, but together in one home
A family unit, married, but alone
My thoughts go back to before the fall
When we cared enough to give it our all
We have a son, and we have a place
But that’s all that’s left, the damage can’t erase
If I could lose all that we have now
I’d try to find a way, somehow
To fall in love, and recapture the fire
The utter devotion, passion, desire
But all that is left, are bitter fears
And a relationship that is left in tears




Copyright © darkscorpio ... [ 2006-03-22 19:49:07]
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Re: Made of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:52:07 PM AEST
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awesome write! this rips at my heart for I am going through a similar situation. has a wonderful flow yet such a heartfelt message behind it.. great great job! A+++++
--If I could lose all that we have now
I’d try to find a way, somehow
To fall in love, and recapture the fire
The utter devotion, passion, desire-- these are my favorite lines in this piece i really liked the feelings here...


Re: Made of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 08:14:14 PM AEST
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this was powerful, beautful and intense... Wow
Alex Trotter-Fernandez


Re: Made of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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wow this is short but very emotion filled.. you feel what you read in this .. very powerful write.. good job

JENNI


Re: Made of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:39:22 PM AEST
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What a heartbreaking write, my heart goes out to you, well written

LG


Re: Made of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:19:20 PM AEST
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yes i agree with what everyone else said.
deep emotiomal write.




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