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No one hears my death’s sweet serenade,
Shivering strings are tendons in my wrists,
And bow my razor blade.
A silent song sung in solitude,
That nobody can hear,
A melody that’s felt inside of you,
Not perceived with human ears.
I play my sadness oh so blue,
While my violin weeps red tears.
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Painfully Beautiful

Contributed by necronomy on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I play my sorrowed song in silence,
No one hears my death’s sweet serenade,
Shivering strings are tendons in my wrists,
And bow my razor blade.
A silent song sung in solitude,
That nobody can hear,
A melody that’s felt inside of you,
Not perceived with human ears.
I play my sadness oh so blue,
While my violin weeps red tears.

Copyright Â© necronomy ... [ 2003-01-31 05:30:00]
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Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:20:00 AM AEST
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wow, this is a great write - i love the imagery you use. keep writing xxx

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:33:30 AM AEST
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Excellent................

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 07:57:54 PM AEST
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very taken with this very good write
rosie

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Pigglet on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:53:44 PM AEST
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wow, unfortionatly this poem hits close to home. It was probably just 7 or 8 monts ago that i did that and it was just like your poem states. keep up the good work and hopefully if life hasn't gotten any better that i hope it will soon because i am feeling life the way it is sappose tobe felt and it feels really good. Pigglet

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:19:04 AM AEST
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Oh, Necro this was the first poem I've read of yours and it was indeed painfully beautiful. Words cant describe how this made me feel.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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great write!

mckayla

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 02:40:35 PM AEST
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very interesting write. it is a lot like mine and a friend of mines writing he goes by unhloy soldier. why dont you read mine and i have another under my dads account called sleeping beauty tell me what you think of em.
once again i really like this and hope you keep coming with more.
exiled

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:24:00 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful, Necro.... Loved it.,.
Jenni

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:26:16 AM AEST
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a very beautiful write. great imagery. can't wait to read more from you.
kara

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 05:04:50 PM AEST
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beautiful...

Re: Painfully Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 11:57:03 PM AEST
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melancholy, the blood of silence
some modes remain unshareable
happiness is better shared.

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