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Array ( [sid] => 116850 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emptiness [time] => 2006-03-22 14:07:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Welcome to my world
the world of the damned
welcome to my peace
the screaming of thousands
welcome to my home
destroyed by violence
welcome to my life
empty inside.....

You say you can't be loved
why do you think that?
cause some idiots told you so?
why can't you see what I see?
why can't you know what I know?
you want to give in and give up
if you do, all that I did for you was worthless
I might as well just show you the other side of me
if that's the case
maybe then you will understand and see
if you look into that face
is that what you want?
is that what you seek?
do you want to see why I was called heartless?
do you want to see the fullness of the Black-Heart?
the only thing keeping me alive is hope of a better tomorrow
the only thing that keeps me from dying is the small piece
of love still in my heart.
and last night, my heart broke.......
I'm here for you, but you don't believe that
cause you've heard it a thousand times
I care for you, but you don't believe that
cause you've heard it a million times
there's love in my heart, do you want it?
is that what will keep you from giving in?
if that's the case, it's yours...
I'll give you whatever you need
don't worry bout giving it back
why should you be different from the rest?
just understand this one thing
you woke up the demon in me last night
your tears touched my soul
and I'm fighting that war again
and this time I might lose.....


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Emptiness

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:07:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Welcome to my world
the world of the damned
welcome to my peace
the screaming of thousands
welcome to my home
destroyed by violence
welcome to my life
empty inside.....

You say you can't be loved
why do you think that?
cause some idiots told you so?
why can't you see what I see?
why can't you know what I know?
you want to give in and give up
if you do, all that I did for you was worthless
I might as well just show you the other side of me
if that's the case
maybe then you will understand and see
if you look into that face
is that what you want?
is that what you seek?
do you want to see why I was called heartless?
do you want to see the fullness of the Black-Heart?
the only thing keeping me alive is hope of a better tomorrow
the only thing that keeps me from dying is the small piece
of love still in my heart.
and last night, my heart broke.......
I'm here for you, but you don't believe that
cause you've heard it a thousand times
I care for you, but you don't believe that
cause you've heard it a million times
there's love in my heart, do you want it?
is that what will keep you from giving in?
if that's the case, it's yours...
I'll give you whatever you need
don't worry bout giving it back
why should you be different from the rest?
just understand this one thing
you woke up the demon in me last night
your tears touched my soul
and I'm fighting that war again
and this time I might lose.....






Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-03-22 14:07:41]
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Re: Emptiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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there is a lot of anger in this poem. i'm sure that whoever hurt you "last night" did not mean to...in fact that might have been the very lest thing they ever wanted to do! so plz dont let it break whatever you have left....


Re: Emptiness (User Rating: 1 )
by Concrete_Rose on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:13:31 PM AEST
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OMG, THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, I'M GOING THROUGH SUMTHING SIMILAR WITH MY B/F AT THE MOMENT, GOOD JOB




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