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Array ( [sid] => 116837 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hopeless [time] => 2006-03-22 10:06:21 [hometext] => I am feeling pretty hopeless and downhearted, just kinda want to give up. I dont really see the point in putting up with anything anymore [bodytext] => My heart is no more as it use to be, it is a heart turned cold
My heart once was gentle and kind listening to all I was told
That day is gone I had to harden my heart to and learn not to care
I don’t care about the pain that once was I accept that life is unfair
I still will go on living each day just not the same child I use to be
The only one that I held dear left with out saying one last word to me
But that is done and over with I didn’t need my heart anyway
The sky is always dark rain always falls, this is now a normal day
Do not bother trying to fix me, I am broken and it does not matter
If some how my heart is fixed… one blow and again it will shatter
Don’t worry about me I will be just fine I can survive on my own
I only wanted to be alive for him anyway… he left, now I am all alone
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Nothingness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Hopeless

Contributed by Nothingness on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:06:21 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My heart is no more as it use to be, it is a heart turned cold
My heart once was gentle and kind listening to all I was told
That day is gone I had to harden my heart to and learn not to care
I don’t care about the pain that once was I accept that life is unfair
I still will go on living each day just not the same child I use to be
The only one that I held dear left with out saying one last word to me
But that is done and over with I didn’t need my heart anyway
The sky is always dark rain always falls, this is now a normal day
Do not bother trying to fix me, I am broken and it does not matter
If some how my heart is fixed… one blow and again it will shatter
Don’t worry about me I will be just fine I can survive on my own
I only wanted to be alive for him anyway… he left, now I am all alone




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Re: Hopeless (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 12:03:23 PM AEST
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your not a quitter your a fighter.


I know deep down you care.

I am not tryimg to fix you YOU can do that. for yourself.

THOUGHTS ARE LIVING THINGS WITH WINGS.

remember that .

God bless please keep in touch K.

Doug :-) :-)


Re: Hopeless (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 12:16:59 PM AEST
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I know how you feel hope you can find the courage to keep going on. Great write


Re: Hopeless (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 05:41:28 PM AEST
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I hope your heart can heal, as you probably already know: writing helps. So keep writing, its your thread and needle...and maybe super glue...

~April




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