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Array ( [sid] => 116828 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Looks to kill. [time] => 2006-03-22 06:31:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw you there tonight.
the one with the smile, and looks to kill.
You saw me too.
Don't pretend you couldn't see through clouded eyes.
With a bottle in hand
And a glint in your eye.
You wanted to hurt me as much as I you.
And when the music died down, and the crowd thinned out,
When that girl forgot how to dance
You and I forgot each other
And went our seperate ways.
Later in the night, i saw you again.
This time you could not move.
You could not object.
Forced to listen for once in your life.
I guess this is the last time.
Surreal as it may be...it's no ******* dream.
Because I know you saw me.
You saw my plea, my promise, my hope.
And I saw your back.
Again.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 6 [informant] => UrbanFlower [notes] => Poem edited due to the use of a banned word. Please read and follow the site rules. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Looks to kill.

Contributed by UrbanFlower on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I saw you there tonight.
the one with the smile, and looks to kill.
You saw me too.
Don't pretend you couldn't see through clouded eyes.
With a bottle in hand
And a glint in your eye.
You wanted to hurt me as much as I you.
And when the music died down, and the crowd thinned out,
When that girl forgot how to dance
You and I forgot each other
And went our seperate ways.
Later in the night, i saw you again.
This time you could not move.
You could not object.
Forced to listen for once in your life.
I guess this is the last time.
Surreal as it may be...it's no ******* dream.
Because I know you saw me.
You saw my plea, my promise, my hope.
And I saw your back.
Again.

Copyright © UrbanFlower ... [ 2006-03-22 06:31:07]
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Re: Looks to kill. (User Rating: 1 )
by cupcake__violence on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:53:20 AM AEST
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very good write.
that has happened to me before
keep up the great work

cupcake__violence

Re: Looks to kill. (User Rating: 1 )
by PLformalyknownasPpaul on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:13:24 AM AEST
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keep writting
its a disipline worth getting into
not everying will work
but when it does

i like this poem
maby like is the wrong word
i admire the concentration of emotion and the clarity of expression
the poet speaks truth
not reality truth
the truth behind or beyond the actuality
and the mundane

Re: Looks to kill. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:37:32 AM AEST
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Very powerful you've expressed your feelings superbly here, putting pen to paper can help sooth the emotions so much.

J.

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