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Array ( [sid] => 116813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't do it anymore [time] => 2006-03-21 20:48:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dark clouds hang above this life
Casting shadows of misery
Hiding me from the light
Sheltering me from love…
I lay frozen in fear of this world
That now rests above me
Pushing on the knife
That presses into my soul
Digging deeper through my pain
Leaving scars along the flesh
Where the blades of love once dug deep…
Remembering the laughs along the way
The evil eyes of discontent
Leering unto me
Passing their judgment
They smile in my face
And spit on my back as they leave me…
Left
Alone
To force my way through life
To struggle with the worry
Fighting this feeling
Of giving up
And giving in
And coming to this realization…

That I can’t do it anymore… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 301 [topic] => 13 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I can't do it anymore

Contributed by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dark clouds hang above this life
Casting shadows of misery
Hiding me from the light
Sheltering me from love…
I lay frozen in fear of this world
That now rests above me
Pushing on the knife
That presses into my soul
Digging deeper through my pain
Leaving scars along the flesh
Where the blades of love once dug deep…
Remembering the laughs along the way
The evil eyes of discontent
Leering unto me
Passing their judgment
They smile in my face
And spit on my back as they leave me…
Left
Alone
To force my way through life
To struggle with the worry
Fighting this feeling
Of giving up
And giving in
And coming to this realization…

That I can’t do it anymore…

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2006-03-21 20:48:30]
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Re: I can't do it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:02:33 PM AEST
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this is a powerful and emotion write. please don't give up though. you are not alone. ;)

Re: I can't do it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 12:25:42 PM AEST
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Very emotional write. I know exactly where you are coming from. Excellent piece. Hope you find strength to keep going on.

Re: I can't do it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:31:45 PM AEST
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Oh how I know this feeling. Please don't give up, you have so much to live for. Be strong like I know you are.

Re: I can't do it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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YOU can do it.............You have so much and more. Try smiling, and thinking of happiness........Yes hurt is hard to give up on...But you Chris, can do it. Yes sad write. Lots of feeling in it. Just turn it around....Lift your head up and know you are worth it.

Brew~

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