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Your languid manner of flight has tasted sweet never
And shunning those of no conquest has been ineffectual
I can smell your evasion in the sweat you pore
While I lick it clean and hoped it would seep
Not limpid but hazy in the recoil of sight
While words matched where demeanor clashed
And passive hair pulling made me come
Your crux has never been so delayed
Your point has recession in never leaving your lips
Parlous, where lust met love and one ate the other selfishly
I can’t have, I can’t retreat
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Avoidance

Contributed by boobiepeach on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 07:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

Self restraint of those who have never given you strain
Your languid manner of flight has tasted sweet never
And shunning those of no conquest has been ineffectual
I can smell your evasion in the sweat you pore
While I lick it clean and hoped it would seep
Not limpid but hazy in the recoil of sight
While words matched where demeanor clashed
And passive hair pulling made me come
Your crux has never been so delayed
Your point has recession in never leaving your lips
Parlous, where lust met love and one ate the other selfishly
I can’t have, I can’t retreat

Copyright Â© boobiepeach ... [ 2006-03-21 19:24:54]
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Re: Avoidance (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 09:00:33 PM AEST
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incredible word usage. --Your crux has never been so delayed
Your point has recession in never leaving your lips-- nice... great write!! A++++

Re: Avoidance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 12:19:24 AM AEST
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This is a very, very (so good i said it twice!) piece of writing as holderofthestone said great word usage.

Excellent.

J.

Re: Avoidance (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:21:37 AM AEST
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I thought this was a very well put together piece nicely done.Just ignore that wanna be vampire_queen shes a fake so ignore her.
good write

Re: Avoidance (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 03:30:35 PM AEST
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Hi there BobbiePeach.......long time no see, and after reading this fine piece.........I'd say why........you're a Word Master Bobbie Peach, such control over words and how to use them. This is a fine work indeed!
Warm love
consue

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