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Array ( [sid] => 11681 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Hurt Of Love [time] => 2003-01-31 02:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The hurt of love
I swore no more to feel
To block out all emotions
Never to be real
Allow no other to cause my grief
To trust no man
Was now my belief
I thought I sealed
My foolish heart
But you...
Penetrated the deepest part
I trusted you
With the love I gave
My heart you held captive
I became your slave
A weeping soul
Is what I've become
I see no end to the damage
You've done
From now until forever
A promise I make to me
To never love another
My heart will stay with me
So days of sorrow
Come into view
When I look into your eyes
For the man I once knew
For him
I would have done anything
He set my soul afire
He made my heart sing
Traces of him
I still see in you
But you are hung up
On third person point of view
When the clouds of doubt pass
And clarity breaks through
I hope you will see then
I trusted you
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Jilly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Hurt Of Love

Contributed by Jilly on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The hurt of love
I swore no more to feel
To block out all emotions
Never to be real
Allow no other to cause my grief
To trust no man
Was now my belief
I thought I sealed
My foolish heart
But you...
Penetrated the deepest part
I trusted you
With the love I gave
My heart you held captive
I became your slave
A weeping soul
Is what I've become
I see no end to the damage
You've done
From now until forever
A promise I make to me
To never love another
My heart will stay with me
So days of sorrow
Come into view
When I look into your eyes
For the man I once knew
For him
I would have done anything
He set my soul afire
He made my heart sing
Traces of him
I still see in you
But you are hung up
On third person point of view
When the clouds of doubt pass
And clarity breaks through
I hope you will see then
I trusted you

Copyright © Jilly ... [ 2003-01-31 02:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Hurt Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:48:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem!!!

mckayla

Re: The Hurt Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ThirtyDays on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:33:21 PM AEST
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I like this poem for it captures the how all feelings of love and sorrow seem to most be felt in the chest.. the heart if u will...

it's like although the brain is what makes us recognize an emotion... it's some other unseen force in our heart that makes us feel certain emotions.

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