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Diary

Contributed by Kitsune on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

It falls open like the most natural thing in the world Dog-eared pages framed with ink-stained thumbprints Flocks of words herded within the cramped confines of college-ruled paper Twisting, bending leaning on each other for support Hiding names that hide confessions answers that lead to more questions than they’re worth testimonies posing as hasty scrawls adjectives soaked in guilt epiphanies cornered by commas and the words shiver down the page chilled by their own meaning Desperately scrambling at the edges clawing their way through choppy sentences Shocking themselves with letters that crumble and quiver and leave not the tiniest ounce of doubt to what they mean and to what they could mean

Copyright Â© Kitsune ... [ 2006-03-21 18:54:20]
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Re: Diary (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:37:58 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC :D

You have a good start here, this is an interesting piece of poetry. I am not exactly sure what you mean it to be about, but I love the image of the words shivering down the page, and I think the first 8 lines are very well written and are saying something many say, ina unique way.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy your time here at YPDC.

Great write,
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx

Re: Diary (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 08:11:14 PM AEST
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Wow, I've never read a poem like that. It's really good! It's got a unique style! Great job!
-Drapes

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