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Array ( [sid] => 116785 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dream [time] => 2006-03-21 09:39:31 [hometext] => This is a poem on the freakiest and most disturbing dream I ever had. IT WAS JUST A DREAM so NO I never killed anyone...-_-; [bodytext] => Unrealistic torment
Blood and malice and hatred running through my veins
A dark and evil smirk glued on my face
Unremovable like the title I now have
Murderer. Dam right!
I laugh as I pull the trigger and the bullet whizes into my target
My friend falls to the ground and I laugh out loud maniacly
Shoving him down a steep hill and to his doom
Two dead. Two very close to me are dead by my hands
What is wrong with me?
It is like I am a prisoner watching my body grow in evilness
I watch as my body looks at me and grins that horrid evil smile
I want to look away
I want to cry out "STOP!"
But I am paralyzed. I cannot move!
Just watch as my body grows in darkness
Sucking in the hate and the lies and the evil
What have I done?
I've unleashed the monster that lives inside me
And it has taken over me
I have a front row seat to watch the monster in me distroy everything
And I can't stop it
The wolf in me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 13 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Dream

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 09:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Unrealistic torment
Blood and malice and hatred running through my veins
A dark and evil smirk glued on my face
Unremovable like the title I now have
Murderer. Dam right!
I laugh as I pull the trigger and the bullet whizes into my target
My friend falls to the ground and I laugh out loud maniacly
Shoving him down a steep hill and to his doom
Two dead. Two very close to me are dead by my hands
What is wrong with me?
It is like I am a prisoner watching my body grow in evilness
I watch as my body looks at me and grins that horrid evil smile
I want to look away
I want to cry out "STOP!"
But I am paralyzed. I cannot move!
Just watch as my body grows in darkness
Sucking in the hate and the lies and the evil
What have I done?
I've unleashed the monster that lives inside me
And it has taken over me
I have a front row seat to watch the monster in me distroy everything
And I can't stop it
The wolf in me




Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2006-03-21 09:39:31]
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Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:07:02 AM AEST
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26 reads and not a single comment? is it THAT bad?


Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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I've had one nightmare/dream that turned into a poem, but the source of the evil wasn't me. It must have been very disturbing... good for writing, though. Dreams always are.
Take care.
David




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