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Unfinished poems with your name at the top
But writing them hurt so I made myself stop

There were
Other girls that I thought I could love
But it was only you that I thought the world of

There were
So many times that I didn't know what to do
overwhelmed by emotions caused by losing you

Maybe I
Should've been quiet and let you get on with your life
But it's hard when for so long I thought you'd be my wife

Maybe I
Could've won your heart back if I tried hard enough
But I gave up on love 'cause the emotions were rough

But I
Want another chance because your always on my mind
And isn't it funny how true love can make you blind

Because I
Get caught up thinking about the times that we shared
And the thought of losing you is making me scared

So I'm
Telling you now that you make me short of breath
And if it means anything, I love you to death. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 373 [topic] => 22 [informant] => timbothepyro [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Love You

Contributed by timbothepyro on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

There were
Unfinished poems with your name at the top
But writing them hurt so I made myself stop

There were
Other girls that I thought I could love
But it was only you that I thought the world of

There were
So many times that I didn't know what to do
overwhelmed by emotions caused by losing you

Maybe I
Should've been quiet and let you get on with your life
But it's hard when for so long I thought you'd be my wife

Maybe I
Could've won your heart back if I tried hard enough
But I gave up on love 'cause the emotions were rough

But I
Want another chance because your always on my mind
And isn't it funny how true love can make you blind

Because I
Get caught up thinking about the times that we shared
And the thought of losing you is making me scared

So I'm
Telling you now that you make me short of breath
And if it means anything, I love you to death.

Copyright © timbothepyro ... [ 2006-03-20 21:23:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo_kisses on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:57:34 PM AEST
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wow.. i really like this poem. i know what your feeling in a way but i am the female and he is the guy..lol.. i have been dealing with it sice august now. and i know how you are feeling somewhat... great write...

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:48:27 AM AEST
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great write i can really relate to this. best of wishes and god bless.
~Justin L.~

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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SO AMAZING- WOW- WHAT MORE CAN I SAY? BUT FIGHT FOR HER-
SHANNA

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by timbothepyro on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:18:37 AM AEST
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thanks for the good reviews....she started crying so bad when she read this....but i think it was for the better cuz shes coming home from college to come visit me :-)

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 06:01:47 PM AEST
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I really like this.
Wow, reminds me of the past.
REally well described emotion.
I can say that I like this infinite times.
It's exactly how I could feel in some momments.

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Concrete_Rose on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 01:48:19 PM AEST
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I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM...BREATH TAKING.....

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