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Array ( [sid] => 116750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dark Sea [time] => 2006-03-20 18:57:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Across the darkness of the sea
a voice rose up and spoke to me
telling me of the great things that I was to do
but never told me about you.

I thought that forever I would be me
but you came and changed what I would be
thru all of my days
I hoped that you would come my way.

Now looking across this dark sea
I asked the voice who she would be
I asked if she would have hair like the bright sun
and if her voice could calm even the darkest one

I asked what kind of person she would be
and that if she even knew me
the voice replied with a voice that cheered me up
and I thanked that voice and asked that things would be perfect from above

The voice replied with a calm talk
and told me to be careful how i would walk
told me to always be true to me
and never come back to the darkness of the sea. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => whiteleo1984 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Dark Sea

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:57:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Across the darkness of the sea
a voice rose up and spoke to me
telling me of the great things that I was to do
but never told me about you.

I thought that forever I would be me
but you came and changed what I would be
thru all of my days
I hoped that you would come my way.

Now looking across this dark sea
I asked the voice who she would be
I asked if she would have hair like the bright sun
and if her voice could calm even the darkest one

I asked what kind of person she would be
and that if she even knew me
the voice replied with a voice that cheered me up
and I thanked that voice and asked that things would be perfect from above

The voice replied with a calm talk
and told me to be careful how i would walk
told me to always be true to me
and never come back to the darkness of the sea.

Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-03-20 18:57:20]
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Re: The Dark Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:20:55 PM AEST
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nice poem I enjoyed the read
freespirt

Re: The Dark Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 09:20:39 PM AEST
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very well written! good feeling in it, and the best thing of all is the since of hope thats given. great write!

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