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Array ( [sid] => 11671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => no room for you [time] => 2003-01-30 23:20:00 [hometext] => this is about a thing very dear to my heart...the
music...the mood...the life...the end [bodytext] => remember sitting there my friend?
your crowd around and you were safe
you were someone so alive
underneath the golden lights
your dreams were real, your life was free
you were so alive, you were meant to be
and all around you the raucous sound
everyone you loved around

but now the walls are boarded up
the windows closed, barring us from view
the place where once the music sounded
now is bare and gone for you

where you would spend your teenage nights
under the golden city lights
now it's gone, no room for you
for all the things you wanted to do
and as you turn your head to cry
and wonder what and wonder why...

no room for you, your life, your soul
no way for you to be whole...


you'll have to find another way
while wishing for the days of yesterday...

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
no room for you

Contributed by Blue on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



remember sitting there my friend?
your crowd around and you were safe
you were someone so alive
underneath the golden lights
your dreams were real, your life was free
you were so alive, you were meant to be
and all around you the raucous sound
everyone you loved around

but now the walls are boarded up
the windows closed, barring us from view
the place where once the music sounded
now is bare and gone for you

where you would spend your teenage nights
under the golden city lights
now it's gone, no room for you
for all the things you wanted to do
and as you turn your head to cry
and wonder what and wonder why...

no room for you, your life, your soul
no way for you to be whole...


you'll have to find another way
while wishing for the days of yesterday...





Copyright © Blue ... [ 2003-01-30 23:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: no room for you (User Rating: 1 )
by syarmz on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:27:11 AM AEST
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great write!!..i appreciate the poem


Re: no room for you (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:30:13 PM AEST
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i love it... "and all around you the raucous sound"... thats exactly it... "everything you love around" perfect Blue

Lindsey




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