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How could anyone take and break what you have hidden
Destroying
Taking the "whole"away, and never returning any back
You though....Could turn it all backwards, and reastart
Recarnate
Take the old...Toss it
If the old still remains, soul search the desicions
Just remember... It can all come together
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A brighter light has Shown

Contributed by brew on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:20:20 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The sadness that lies within those eyes
How could anyone take and break what you have hidden
Destroying
Taking the "whole"away, and never returning any back
You though....Could turn it all backwards, and reastart
Recarnate
Take the old...Toss it
If the old still remains, soul search the desicions
Just remember... It can all come together
Always a brighter light at the end of the Tunnel

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-03-19 17:20:20]
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Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:55:27 PM AEST
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good message

Shari

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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Take the old...Toss it

What a great message for getting on with your life.

Great.great work.

J.

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:32:01 PM AEST
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A wise peice of poetry well stated and nicely written.

Ben

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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Very uplifting :)

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 09:56:42 PM AEST
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The past is passed and cannot be changed. Rarely even can it be rearranged on trying. Best to always go forward and look for the best in today and tomorrow. Great write.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 06:09:57 AM AEST
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This is so true, my friend..... lovely write and message...
Hugs
Jenni
(How is our mutual friend?)

Re: A brighter light has Shown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:09:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful and wise words Dayna. Exceedingly
great advice. I loved it !

*hugs*
~Breezy

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